Revisions

So, I did some re-writing on Personal Demons, using the notes given to me by The Tracking Board (with their studio coverage).

Not bad.

A lot of what they suggested were really easy fixes.

I think the script is, perhaps, a bit stronger now.

I feel most confident in submitting it now.

Incidentally, and I hope all screenwriters do this, I kept my original draft, I simply saved this new draft (on which I did revisions) on my computer as "Personal Demons 2nd draft".

Hopefully, one day I can post online all the various different drafts and people can see the evolution of the film.